A Good Man’s Name

– March Round-Up Challenge –

By Bakerj

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Hoss hesitated at the swing doors.  “Y’think this is a good idea?”

When I turned away, Adam’s hand stopped me.  “We’ve got nothing to hide.”

The piano continued to tinkle its tune, but the saloon fell quiet. 

“Hey, boys.  What can I get you?”  Sam’s cheeriness failed to hide how his eyes flicked around, seeing if trouble was coming.

We lined up along the bar.  Hostility crackled off the walls.  I looked down and unclenched my hands.  The polished wood under my fingertips felt cold and hard.

Adam ordered three beers.  I straightened my back against the gaze of every man boring into us.  It happened wherever we went lately.

They knew my father.  Knew what he stood for.  But that wasn’t worth a hill of beans once the rumors started.  And there were plenty ready to spread the lie of how Ben Cartwright really made his fortune.

Hoss swallowed a mouthful of his beer, but his usual grunt of enjoyment didn’t come.  I glanced at Adam.  His jaw was set like granite.

My hands clutched my glass.  Something solid after one hell of a month.  Rustlers had hit every ranch in the county, driving off the young mavericks.  We’d formed patrols to find the cattle, and mine found twenty head hidden in a canyon on our land.  That’s when the rumors started.  Pa brushed them aside as nonsense.  But when more mavericks were found, tempers turned ugly.

We’d stood right behind Pa at that Cattleman’s meeting.  He defended his innocence as only he could.  But the suspicion in the eyes of those men haunted me.  Pa told us not to worry.  But every time we rode into town, we got more cold shoulders and heard whispers behind our backs.

Then Mary-Sue called off our date to the dance.

“Sorry, Little Joe.  But Pa wouldn’t like it.”

I smiled.  My girl was notorious for running her Pa ragged with her independence.  “That’s never bothered you before.”

The look in her eyes struck me like ice water.  “A girl’s gotta be careful of the company she keeps.” 

I spun on my heel and walked away.  She hit harder than any man, and the insult burned in my chest throughout the ride home.

When we rode into town, we tried to ignore the looks and the nervous way Mr. Abramson stacked our supplies.  I had dumped the last sack in the buckboard when Adam suggested that beer.

The scrape of the chair on the wooden floor signaled trouble.  “Something sure stinks in here.”

The three of us eased around, elbows resting on the bar.  Adam looked Clyde in the eye.  “You got something to say?”

“What’re you Cartwrights doing in here mixing with honest folk?”

Was he kidding?  Three months ago, we’d been at his ranch helping to raise a barn.  Adam’s hand clamped over my arm.  Pa’s words rang in my ears.  “Now you three stay out of trouble.”  I eased back down.  Adam was right.  Letting Clyde get under my skin wouldn’t change anything.

“We’re just here for a beer.” Adam began to turn his back, but Clyde wasn’t finished.

“All this time, you Cartwrights spouted that high and mighty talk of friendship and fairness.  An’ you’ve been robbing us blind.”

The piano stumbled over a note and went silent.  Hoss adjusted his hat.  “As I recall, when you lost that new herd and couldn’t cover the interest owed to the bank, it were our pa that loaned you the money to see you through.”

“Money made through rustling.  Your Pa slinks lower than a snake.”

Adam’s fist connected with Clyde’s jaw so fast it took me a moment to realize what had happened.  Then my fists flew.

The saloon shook under the explosion we let loose.  Payment for the weeks of snubs and jibes.  Chairs splintered.  Boots crunched over shattered glass, and men flew over tables.

I wiped my bleeding lip with raw knuckles.  We were the last men standing — but there was no victory.  Resentment still poisoned the air.

“All right, you three come with me.”  Deputy Clem stood in the doorway.  His shotgun made it clear it wasn’t a request. 

We turned when the cell door slammed, and the keys rattled in the lock.

“Why lock us up?  I told you we’d pay the damages.”  Clem’s look caught all our attention.  Adam asked, “What’s this all about?”

Moving to a small table, Clem picked up two irons.  Their metal bent into our brand.  “These were found yesterday with some mavericks … along with this.”  He showed us the pine tree seared into a hide, then turned it over to reveal the original brand.

My fingers squeezed the bars.  “Oh, c’mon!  You’re not buying any of that?  Someone’s trying to frame us.”

“Sure, they are.”

Clem was new.  He didn’t know us, but Roy did.  “Where’s Sheriff Coffee?”

“He rode out to bring you all in.”

The cell echoed with our cry, “What?”

But Clem had gone.  Leaving us to pace the cell and stare out the window.  The news was spreading.  We could smell the excitement, taste the satisfaction.  Old man Cartwright’s sons were in jail, and he’d be joining them.

I was ready to climb out of my skin when we heard the commotion.  We strained to see and hear what the crowd was shouting, but we couldn’t make anything out.  But someone was being brought in.

The door from the office swung open.  My breath caught.  It wasn’t Pa.  Three strangers took our cell.  Bill Bixby, the new land agent, took the other, and I had more questions than the dollars in my pocket. 

After Roy handed me a cup of coffee, I sat down next to Pa.  “Course I knew your Pa weren’t no rustler.  But someone sure wanted us to think he was.  That’s when I remembered him asking me about Bixby.”

Pa nodded.  “Some of his dealings had me questioning what he was up to.  But I wasn’t careful enough, because Bixby got wind of what I was doing.”

“He figured with your pa accused of rustling, no one would take a mite of notice of anything he said about Bixby being crooked.”

“If you knew that, why not tell us?”

“Roy had no evidence, Joe.”

“That’s right.  I told everyone I was bringing you all in so he’d think his plan had worked.  I didn’t know you boys were coming to town, but that helped.  Soon as Bixby saw you get arrested, he lit out.  I sent Clem and Jeb after him, while me and the County Recorder took a looksee in his office.  He was pulling every crooked trick in the book.” 

Adam set his coffee cup down.  “That proves him a swindler but not a rustler.”

“Clem took care of that.  He tracked Bixby clear to that line shack of yours up by Mule Deer pass and caught him paying off those men.”

Pa finished the tale.  “Roy told Clem to pick me up on his way back.  Those three he’d hired couldn’t spill the beans fast enough.  We had to listen to them all the way to town.”

“Bixby’s gonna see the inside of the cell for a long time.”

Pa took Roy’s hand.  “And you cleared our names.”

After thanking Roy, we headed for the livery to collect the wagon and Buck.  Word of Pa’s innocence was spreading fast. 

Bixby’s scheming didn’t matter.  What mattered was how quick folks had been to believe the worst of a man who had always fought for what was right.  Those same people watched us ride out; shame etched into their faces.

Forgiveness would come.  But, for now, we rode toward the mountains and home. 

~ The End ~

March 2026

Published by Bakerj

I have been a fan of Bonanza for fifty years and counting. I love the show and have been writing fanfiction since 2018. Spending time in the world of the Cartwrights, and especially with Joe, is a lot of fun. I hope you enjoy my stories.

16 thoughts on “A Good Man’s Name

  1. Another great story. I always thought the “good” citizens of Virginia City were way too quick to judge. They should be ashamed of themselves. Always made me want to smack those people upside the head! 😆 Thanks for the story. Keep writing — we appreciate it. Bonnie

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  2. Wow, you sure packed a lot of action, tension, and drama into that short story, June! And all of it very clearly Cartwright-style. Loved it! Jan

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  3. We did see this happen in the show, on occasions, when people were quick to believe the worst of someone whom they knew to be decent
    Glad it was all sorted out
    Little Joe forever
    Lynne

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    1. That’s the joy of fanfiction — getting to dig deeper into the themes the show touched on, and seeing them through different characters’ eyes. Bonanza gave us the seeds, and we get to grow them. My idea of heaven! Thanks for reading, Lynne.

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  4. Good story, June. I liked how they set the trap to find the culprit! The brothers voices sounded exactly like they were on the show.

    Interesting how people are so quick to judge – and worse yet are those that go along with a mob mentality.
    Irene S

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    1. It is interesting. Human nature gives us so much to write about. I’m delighted you enjoyed the story and the voices came through for you. Thanks for leaving a comment, Irene. They are always appreciated.

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  5. A most enjoyable read, June. A spot-on portrayal of the Cartwrights with an episode-worthy theme. Thank you.

    Chrissie.

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  6. What a beautiful story, June! It shows how quickly some people try to ruin a reputation! Well written!

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  7. Well done, June! Everyone is in character which makes for an enjoyable read. I appreciate a story that makes sense!

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  8. people are quick to think the worst of someone but slow to recognize their mistake and slow to show support. Well done. And I’m glad Joe didn’t throw the first punch for once.

    thank you

    Sylvette

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    1. I agree. Human nature is a strange thing. Thank goodness, or what would we write about? LOL! Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, Sylvette. They always make a writer’s day.

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