A Relaxing Fishing Trip?

2026 February Round-up Challenge

smp4ever

The life of a cowboy isn’t easy: exhaustion, aching muscles, injuries, and pouring sweat pretty much paints an accurate picture.  

For over two weeks, Adam, Hoss, some of the hands, and I lived that daily grind.  We rounded up calves for branding and pulled out bogged cows.  With that done, we moved them to graze on the green grass of the higher pastures.  Fixing fences damaged by the winter snow and runoff, and building dams to collect water for the drier summer season were more of the unpleasant jobs that had to be done.  To say we didn’t want to see or smell another cow, fix any more fences, or eat another bean was an understatement. 

Now came the payoff for that backbreaking work.  A few of the guys were hell-bent on taking off to town so they could get liquored up and use their last bit of energy to bed with soiled doves.

Adam picked the short straw and had to stay home to keep an eye on the ranch and its running. Honestly?  I don’t think he minded at all.  In my imagination, I pictured Adam buried under a pile of books soaking up the quiet and solitude. 

Hoss was heading toward Bridgeport, California to be the best man at his friend Tucker’s wedding.  Tucker was the only man I ever met who was bigger than Hoss but, like Hoss, was a jolly and gentle soul. 

That left me.  Pa had departed from the roundup seven days ago.  He was heading to Sacramento to sign a big timber contract.  Pa figured he’d be back within the week’s time.  Our plan was to meet outside of Reno at the mouth of Dog Creek to do some trout fishing for several days.  Even at twenty-two, I still looked forward to spending time with my pa.  On similar trips, we would have some of our best discussions, not the necessary type, I mean deep, meaningful talks that helped me grow into the man I am today.

As I headed toward Dog Creek, Buck came into sight, tethered to a tree.  Looking to the right, I spotted Pa already setting up our campsite.  

“Hey, Pa!” 

“About time you got here!”

“Good to see you, too, Pa!”

“Come on, son, give me a hand!”

“We can finish setting up later.  The Thaddeus Norris fishing rod you ordered came in.  It’s a real beauty!  Come on, Pa, let’s get fishing!  I can feel them biting!”

Heading to the creek, Pa couldn’t take his eyes off his new fishing rod, admiring it like a kid on Christmas morning. 

My father and I settled ourselves among the reeds, content to share this relaxing time together. Relaxing that is until the wooden rod arched from the weight on the line.

“Pa, you got a big one! Reel it in.  Don’t lose it!  I’m hungry!”

I lunged with the net to snatch up the thrashing trout.  Losing my balance,  I mirrored the flailing fish.  Pa grabbed me and yanked me by my pants, seconds before I plunged into the flowing creek waters. The trout and I safely landed on the muddy bank with a heavy thud.  After a moment of stunned silence, laughter erupted!

Pa and I collected ourselves and prepared to hook a few more trout.

Peace and quiet returned for a brief moment.  As we got ready to cast our lines, a gravelly voice cut through the air shouting, “Cartwright, I’ve been tracking you from Sacramento!  I shoulda gotten that timber contract. You’re gonna pay for robbing me of it.”

Pa and I spun around hearing a familiar voice. We knew who it was but didn’t know exactly where Sam Jensen was. 

Emerging from behind a boulder with his gun drawn, the vindictive man said, “Now I’m gonna get that timber contract by getting rid of you. Sorry Joe. I can’t leave a witness. You and your daddy can enjoy your time together, but in the next life!” 

I knocked my father down and charged toward Jensen.  Quick footwork and zigzagging made me a tough target. Dust was kicking up all around creating a cloud of protection. 

I thrust myself forward and tackled the big man who had disturbed my fishing time with my pa. Grunts and thuds echoed in my ears. I wrestled with Sam to strip him of the gun. I’m sure all my father could see were bodies rolling and thrashing.

Then a shot rang out! 

“Joseph!” 

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“Joseph!” I shouted again.  There was no movement, no sound.  My heart was pounding.  I scrambled up the incline to where the two men lay prone.  In one fluid motion, I booted Jensen over.  I was greeted with dead eyes staring back at me.  Immediately, I knelt down next to my son, gently turning him over.  I was rewarded by soft moans.  Blood was coming from Joe’s head where it appeared he had hit a rock during the final struggle. 

“It’s okay, son.  Your pa is here.”

“Joe’s eyes fluttered open. “Pa?  What happened?” 

“Don’t you know?” 

“I was struggling to get the gun from Jensen.  We both had a grip on it when it went off.  He shoved me hard.  I think I hit my head on a rock.  I don’t remember.”

Pa pressed his neckerchief firmly on my bloodied head, scolding me just as strongly for taking such a risk. 

“Sorry, Pa.”

I looked over to my right.  “Jensen?”

“He’s dead, son.  We’re gonna have to bring his body into Reno and fill out a report.  I’m sorry our fishing trip has to be interrupted.  Plus, I want you to see the doctor.”

“Oh, come on, Pa!  I’m fine.  I don’t need a doctor!”  

“Joe, I think you’re gonna need stitches!  Now stop whining and let’s get going!” 

On the return trip to Dog Creek the next day, I nudged my father. “Pa, is anybody else after you that you wanna tell me about?”

“Not that I know of, son.  How about you?”

“Very funny, Pa.  Let’s get back to our relaxing fishing trip.  Maybe today we can tickle the trout!”

“And finish setting up our camp!”

The end

Author’s notes:

1. Tickling the trout is an ancient technique of gently rubbing a trout’s belly to encourage it to come out so it can be grabbed by its gills. No fishing equipment needed!

2. 1864, which would have been the year, in Bonanza time, when Joe was 22, saw the great drought that caused the destruction of over a million cattle in California. Dog Creek would have dried up or run to a trickle.  Since David Dortort never addressed this issue, I ignored it, too!

Published by smp4ever

Two weeks after my 9th birthday, Little Joe Cartwright rode into my home and stole my heart. I fell in love with the entire Cartwright family. I veered off course when the Beatles came along, however that first love always brought me back to Bonanza. It actually feels like comfort food for me. Learning to Live Again is my first attempt at writing fanfiction. This story grew out of my personal loss and the grief journey I'm still taking. Writing has been a wonderful outlet and I'm enjoying the process.

20 thoughts on “A Relaxing Fishing Trip?

  1. I’m glad you were up for the challenge! Aren’t these little stories fun to write? Only eleven more to go! Thanks for the story. It was a fun read.

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    1. Thanks Pat for taking the time to read my fishy tale and for commenting on it. Yes, it was fun writing. Did you have to add only 11 more to go?? LOL

      I’m glad you enjoyed it.

      Susan

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  2. Bidding on contracts is a dangerous occupation for Ben—it certainly makes for a fun tale! We hope you enjoyed this Pa and Joe challenge, Susan. Thanks for taking part.

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    1. This time Pa caused the trouble! Shocking! Yes, I did enjoy writing for the challenge. Great idea.

      Thanks, June, for taking the time to read my story and for commenting. Much appreciated.

      Susan

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  3. A great little story, with plenty to enjoy, as well as something to get ours, and Ben’s heart, pounding

    I really enjoyed it

    Little Joe forever

    Lynne

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    1. Thanks so much Lynne. Part of the challenge was to keep the story between one and two thousand words, one thousand was an extra challenge. I’m so glad you enjoyed this compacted adventure with Joe and Pa. I’m partial to them.

      Thanks, also, Lynne for taking the time to read it and comment. I truly appreciate it.

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  4. I enjoyed your story very much, Susan! Joe and Pa are always good together but add in a little fun, a little adventure, a little drama – it’s great!

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    1. Thanks so much Jan for taking the time to read my little fish tale. I love writing stories with a heavy emphasis on Joe and Pa. Their personalities play off each other in such a variety of ways. I truly appreciate your wonderful comments and am very happy you enjoyed the story.

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    1. I do too, Rachel. Joe and Pa did have a special and strong bond. I’m so glad you enjoyed my little ‘fish’ tale. Thanks for taking the time to read it and comment.

      Susan

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    1. I’m so glad you enjoyed it, Beate. Thank you for taking the time to comment. I appreciated it very much.

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  5. I liked your story about a grown up Joe & Pa. I loved their relationship as Joe got older and could still be cheeky with Pa without being disrespectful. I could even visualize the location you wrote about. Nice job, Susan!

    Irene S

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    1. Thanks so much, Irene. I’m very pleased that you enjoyed the story. You are credited with this prompt, you know. Hopefully you’ll get your Joe and Pa fix. I feel the same way. Love stories with the two of them, especially.

      Susan

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  6. I loved the story. It was obvious you’ve done your research and it was fun. Work, play, even a couple of sidenotes about Hoss and Adam. It was nice and tightly written, very believable. Well done, an enjoyable read. 😀

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    1. Thanks so much, Cathy, for your very generous and lovely comments. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story.

      My education continues about the 1860s in the West!

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